I won my first poetry contest when I was in 4th grade. It was a school wide contest that we were forced to enter. It was part of our English grade for the semester.
My fine motor skills had not yet developed when I was in 4th grade. My writing may have resembled that of a Neolithic caveman. I could draw crude pictures, and attempt script letters, but as an upside down, backwards dyslexic, my poem, which was to be displayed in front of the principal’s office, would not be written out by me.
I had a male classmate who wrote it out in beautiful flowing cursive.
I was so proud because it looked so beautiful in Bob’s handwriting. I was, however, so embarrassed at the content of the poem. I wanted someone else’s name on it. I would have preferred failure, to having that poem displayed for everyone to see.
Now you may be curious. What kind of fourth grade poem could cause the author such horror?
It was my subject. My subject was romance. Really? Displaying a poem by a fourth grader who even mentioned romance? Is that even ethical. Well, I may be overreacting. The poem was not really about romance. It just mentioned a romantic situation.
I assure you, my definition of romance was innocent, but there were fifth and sixth grade students who made quite a commotion about my choice of words.
My mom kept my poem (of course she did, it was an award winner).
It is really hokey. Keep in mind it was written by a 4th grader. I don’t know where Bob’s printed version is, but it went something like this:
I love to look up at the stars.
If you look close, you may see Mars.
They are always pretty and bright.
They are full of the brightest light.
Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah.
Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah.
Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah.
I love to look up in the dark.
It’s most romantic in the park.
Do you see that? I have no idea what the middle part of the poem was about, nor did my schoolmates. The only thing they saw was me, in a dark romantic park. I heard all about it too. The honor of winning a poetry contest was completely eclipsed by unbelievable embarrassment.
Thanks to my mom who saved this fifty year old memory for me. Now it makes me laugh.
This silly youthful experience did not stop my love of poems or of poetry.
To this day, it is how I see the things around me.
Light and dark, rhymes and rhythms, they are one of the ways I define my world.

